Okay, I've got it figured out now. Are we sick of me talking about my Fictionwise ranking? Yes, probably. Okay, last time. "Bomb" is 5th in recent SF and 12th in all recent ebooks of any genre. (Cool! Only to me? Likely!)
Have been doing some rewriting, and am feeling positive about the story in general, despite everything. Have to leave it for a bit, though, and go read Mauve
for a while. This is a pretty cool book, actually, about how the "creation" of the colour literally changed the world.